Tuesday, June 9, 2009

Continued...Death: I Love you

Hi Friends,

I am going to try something stupid. I was trying to post something to bore you all for last few days. But to your good luck I was empty in key board to type a mess. Then I started reading my previous posts and the comments. I stopped at the comments of the post "Death: I Love You". The comment on the post by Deepa was better than the post itself. I also replied in a messy poetic way.

After few minutes I felt, why not post it to increase the headache of my friends. And here is the comment by Deepa (A girl's wish for her Love) and my reply (A boy's reply for the sake of his Love) on the base origional post "Death: I Love You"


A Girl's wish for her Love:

Oh my love, if you wish to die on my laps,
You will be granted
I will wear the pain as a reward of love.
Love always not end with death,
I will live to prove that.
I will bear the pain until death.
The pain of not being with you,
The pain of lonely life like an empty afternoon,
The pain symbol of our love I bear until the death.


A boy's reply for the sake of his Love

Oh my sweet heart...
Love is great and you will be with your sacrifice...
But what is my fault....
All will praise you for your dedication....
how can I stay with a heavy heart ...
You will have a lonely afternoon...
how can I bear the load "the pity" from dawn to dusk...

I love you...
How can I give you up...
How can I leave you alone....
Oh God! Please don't make me selfish...


Oh God! give me death....
but don't give living death to my sweet heart...
Oh God! Teach me death, but don't teach my sweet heart what is pain....


Oh God! Please make my last two wish fulfilled, before I die.....
I will have no complain....
I will love to love death as much time you send me through birth....






Got headache ? Now go and search for some medicine


Love
Saktishree

2 comments:

Vishal Raj said...

Very well composed. I liked it a lot.

smaranika priyadarshini said...

An emotional & lovely wish from a sweet heart for his heart..
So touching..